Okay... so i've decided to buckle down and write the first chapters of the story that has been haunting me sense the characters appeared about 3 years ago. i've worked out the first chapter along with a prologue, what i need to know is if anyone is interested in reading this story... I'm posting this journal up on both of my sign-on's and i'll put a summary at the end of the journal.

also, is anyone interested in bata-ing my story? I need at least two people... one person who is good at finding spelling/grammar problems, and someone who can tell me what they think of the actual content/story line. if you wan'a try, just leave me a comment.

okay heres the sum of the story.

Timothy is a average boy. he gets average grades, has average hobbies, gets bullied, and is alone for most of his home life. one day he falls through a portal to another world and is granted a year in this new world. at the end of the year he can chose between the life he's always known,leave his family, or chose the life he's built for himself and stay with his friends.